Dude. That was great. I almost don't believe that was your first time with dialogue, that characters voice was so fitting. The animation was beautiful from frame 1, I really love the way you set up the scene. No exposition, other than what the eye can infer. That beginning is pure art.
My favorite bit is your timing. Less than 20 seconds, and you took me from immediate wonder, to surprise, and finally laughter. 10/5

Beautiful. Would love to see a full match, or perhaps a fight sequence.

I honestly could have watched so much more of that. I love the style, and the Rube Goldberg joke with the phones was great. I was also really impressed with that shot in the beginning, of the aisles from that inverted perspective. Good stuff

I might get fired if I play this any longer. Well done.

As a guitarist, I found this really neat. The menu is nice, and I liked the help section.
The actual graphics look great, and the buttons are spaced nicely.
... I will say there is a lack of color, but I'm nitpicky.
A little color and some audio for the notes would have made this perfect.

This is wonderful! I especially love the sound effects of the pterodactyl.